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Thursday, 6 February 2014

Draft Video.

Here is a sneak preview of how my film sequence is shaping up. The following video shows about 75% of the total video which i think i will end up with, furthermore this is only a rough edit- thus timings, cuts, and siound are likely to change slightly. But anyway, see what you think. :)

Please comment opinions after watching!!

P.S The video quality of the final project will be much better. This was just because i wanted to upload it quickly
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  1. Chris Earl7 February 2014 at 03:57

    Don't forget to include studio idents and distrubtion info at the start.

    0:00 - the opening scream is quite effective
    0:03 - I would slow all of your footage down to match the tempo of the music and make the editing a little more adventurous. The opening shot is cut a little too soon. I would start the music with the opening shot.
    I would also cross-dissolve between each shot.
    0:08- Again, the shot is not held for long enough.
    0:10- You don't need the blackout here
    0:12 - Again, this will look better with the music if it's slowed down
    0:15 - I think it should just be "Film 4 presents"
    0:16 - You hold the credits too long. I think about 2-3s each is about right
    0:25 - The credit here should be "a Film Freddy production"
    0:37 - The credit here should have "Freddy Allen" on the second line and "a film by" in lower case
    0:43 - Again, I would cross-fade to this shot and again go for a slower motion
    0:53 - Just make this credit "Zoe Crick"
    1:00 - not sure you need the fade through black here.
    1:08 - you obviously need to add in a lot more credits
    1:32 - I would keep the music going until the title comes down.

    Don't forget to plan out and shoot the additional scene I suggested.

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